Heavy inspiration from a few sites is quite apparent… quite dislike that. Also find it odd that for being a company that provides copywriting services there was nothing engaging for me. Just a big tagline and ‘Contact Us’ link for ‘lets get started’. No references is also a bummer, would be nice to at least see what they’ve been doing recently. Noone is going to read 5 paragraphs of copy about your company and then buy your services, which is all that’s going on here at the moment.
Other than that I like the colors and texture treatments, I don’t think the font families introduced are helping the copy though.
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Rich May 28th, 2010 at 1:32 pm
Heavy inspiration from a few sites is quite apparent… quite dislike that. Also find it odd that for being a company that provides copywriting services there was nothing engaging for me. Just a big tagline and ‘Contact Us’ link for ‘lets get started’. No references is also a bummer, would be nice to at least see what they’ve been doing recently. Noone is going to read 5 paragraphs of copy about your company and then buy your services, which is all that’s going on here at the moment.
Other than that I like the colors and texture treatments, I don’t think the font families introduced are helping the copy though.